You might be wondering why Kenny and Wella is starting into space(well not actually space,more like the roof,but saying "space" just added a dramatical effect,thus causing the crowd to follow the story more intensely)
Anyhow.. yes we have song.. or to be more precise.. we have the music,tune,beat.. call it wat you will.. What we do need now,however is lyrics.. please people.. anything will do,if you feel your lyrics has what it takes.. We'll have look at it..
and if it is chosen,we'l be sure to put your name under the "Thanks" section,on our CD..and maybe also mention it,if we play your song live at one of our gigs
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You might be wondering why Kenny and Wella is starting (ARE STARING) into space(well not actually space,more like the roof,but saying "space" just added a dramatical (DRAMATIC) effect,thus causing the crowd to follow the story more intensely)(A FULL STOP SHOULD BE HERE.)
Anyhow..(THERE SHOULD BE A COMMMA) yes (THERE SHOULD BE A COMMA HERE we have song..(ONE MORE FULL STOP NEEDED TO COMPLETE THE ELLIPSES...) or to be more precise..(THERE SHOULD BE A COMMA HERE, NOT EKKIPSES) we have the music,tune,beat.. call it WHAT (wat) you will.. What we do need now,however(ADD A COMMA HERE) is lyrics..(ANOTHER FULL STOP IS NEEDED TO COMPLETE THE ELLIPSES...) please people..(ANOTHER FULL STOP IS NEEDED TO COMPLETE THE ELLIPSES...) anything will do,(FULL STOP-NOT A COMMA)if(THE 'I' OF 'IF' SHOULD BE A CAPITAL LETTER) you feel your lyrics HAVE (has) what it takes..(IT SHOULD BE A COMMA HERE, NOT ELLIPSES) We'll (THERE SHOULD BE A LOWER-CASE 'w' NOT A CAPITAL 'W') have (A-THIS NEEDS TO BE ADDED TO THE SENTENCE BEFORE THE 'look')look at it..(THIS SHOULD BE A COMMA)
and if it is chosen,(NO COMMA REQUIRED HERE)we'l(ADD ANOTHER 'L' HERE) be sure to put your name under the "Thanks" section,on our CD..(THIS SHOULD BE A COMMA)and maybe also mention it,(NO COMMA REQUIRED HERE)if we play your song live at one of our gigs (A FULL STOP SHOULD BE HERE.)
he h ah ahhha ha ah aha hha ha ...lol
Can I just say that this is one of the funniest things i've heard all week...i even showed this to people at work :)
Robynn
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